Critique Service

 Developmental Editing Service

 

I am delighted to offer you my developmental editing service. Please contact me to work together. 

If have you started writing picture books, on PictureBookPedia you can find many blog posts about the craft of writing picture books. 

 

Picture Book, Fiction

I am happy to work with you on your non-rhyming manuscripts with word counts of up to 1,000 (excluding art notes). You will receive an editorial letter, covering the following topics:

  • Basic Critique (35US$ / 35€)  
    • Narrative Structure & Plot
    • Character development & Character Arc
    • Theme & Thematic message (story moral)
  • In-depth Critique  (65US$ / 65€)  
    • Narrative Structure & Plot
    • Character development & Character Arc
    • Theme & Thematic message (story moral)
    • Social-Emotional Learning (if applicable)
    • Narrator & POV & POV violation
    • Pacing & Page-turner technique
    • Word cut suggestions